User talk:Danaoskenbay

Ways to improve Oskenbay Malik Aueskhanuly
Hi, I'm Rosguill. Danaoskenbay, thanks for creating Oskenbay Malik Aueskhanuly!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. In addition to needing copy-editing for grammar, the article currently has several sections that are in list-format, which should be converted to paragraph format.

Additionally, consider shortening the sections listing Aueskhanuly's artistic and scientific works to only include the most relevant or notable examples.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Rosguill talk 22:43, 3 September 2018 (UTC)