User talk:Dande123

AfC notification: Draft:Massar Solutions has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Massar Solutions. Thanks! I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @  23:11, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Massar Solutions


A tag has been placed on Draft:Massar Solutions, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. creffett (talk) 11:50, 4 August 2019 (UTC)

COI
Thank you for declaring your conflict of interest. That doesn't mean you can write what you like, you must follow the guidance below.
 * you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the organisation claims or interviewing its management. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls
 * The notability guidelines for organisations and companies have been updated. The primary criteria has five components that must be evaluated separately and independently to determine if it is met:
 * significant coverage in
 * independent,
 * multiple,
 * reliable,
 * secondary sources.
 * Note that an individual source must meet all four criteria to be counted towards notability.


 * you must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
 * there shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
 * you must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  13:57, 4 August 2019 (UTC)
 * To add to the above, most of your text was unreferenced, and the references you did give tended to be press releases, interviews with your CEO and company postings rather than the independent third-party sources we require
 * You had external links in the text
 * The text was largely about what you sell, little about the company itself, such as number of employees
 * The text was promotional eg Massar revolutionalised the car leasing industry...  It pays attention to the control of expenses and dangers related to owning and working a vehicle. Resulting in offering safe and cost effective rental and leasing vehicle solutions... lower working dangers, higher use, improved efficiencies, and more prominent reserve funds... will add something special to your day, or week, or month.  and lots more
 * Incidentally, you don't need a new heading for each sentence, that just looks spammy, and be careful with its/it's
 * I'm not going to recreate, it's too spammy for clean-up. I suggest that you look at Tesco as an example of a company article and make sure you understand what I've posted on this page. You need to get this right or you may still be blocked Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  05:45, 5 August 2019 (UTC)