User talk:Dani.Horton

Your submission at Articles for creation: DJ Puffy (June 6)
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CNMall41 (talk) 19:05, 6 June 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: DJ Puffy (June 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CNMall41 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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CNMall41 (talk) 23:01, 18 June 2018 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:DJ Puffy has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:DJ Puffy. Thanks! CNMall41 (talk) 20:28, 25 August 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: DJ Puffy has been accepted
 DJ Puffy, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer. Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! ~Kvng (talk) 13:36, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Ways to improve DJ Puffy
Hi, I'm Rosguill. Dani.Horton, thanks for creating DJ Puffy!

I've just tagged the page, using our page curation tools, as having some issues to fix. The article is broken up across too many section--arguably, almost everything other than Early Life can be collected into a "Career" section.

Additionally, there are a few phrases that run afoul of WP:PEACOCK. Phrases like "There, he captured the attention of event promoter Matthew "Fewwture" Ashby..." or with his most lethal weapon to the competition being his "Caribbean music" could be reworded a bit to preserve neutrality.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, you can leave a comment on my talk page. Or, for more editing help, talk to the volunteers at the Teahouse.

Rosguill talk 20:41, 11 September 2018 (UTC)