User talk:Dani Graf

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Silvio Denz (Entrepreneur)
Some tags were added to your page Silvio Denz (Entrepreneur). I fixed your categories section but as of now your article is in danger of being deleted. The main problem is that you do not have any references to establish notability for the subject (I noticed that you mentioned some in the article itself but you must cite them). If you do not add references as well as more content to establish notability of the subject, there is a chance that someone may come along and delete the article and I would hate for that to happen. Let me know if you need any help and good luck!

Sosthenes12 (talk) 18:08, 27 March 2013 (UTC)Sosthenes12

Hello Sothenes12,

thank you very much for your supply. It is much appreciated. I will find time tomorrow to fix the issues on my page. I hope it wont be to late...If I need help I will ask you, thanks again for your offer. Dani Graf (talk) 11:48, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

No problem! Two other users that I had warned just got their pages deleted by someone else but your page is not in as much danger as theirs was. I think your subject has notability from what is already there, it just needs to be brought out more and cited (which may or may not be what you were trying to do with your further reading section). Interesting article though, sounds like a very talented person. If you need any help just put a messge on my talk page. Good luck again!

Sosthenes12 (talk) 17:29, 28 March 2013 (UTC)Sosthenes12

Hello Sothenes12,

I tried to fix my issues. Can you give me your feedback please? Dani Graf (talk) 14:25, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Hi Dani Graf!

Article looks a lot better. Just a few more things needed:

1. The article is still an orphan which means that not many (in your case 2) other articles on Wikipedia link to yours. If you can think of related articles on Wikipedia and link them to yours appropriately, then the orphan tag can come off.

2. You said the subject lives in Richmond but if you click on that link you have you will find that Wikipedia does not know which Richmond you mean. So you have to specify which Richmond you are talking about and link to that particular page.

3. It's best not to use bare links as references. For that, I generally use MLA style of citing websites. In my experience, I may not have all the information the citation requires but I just do what I can and use the citation. I would suggest that for your citations that are just links.

Let me know if you need any more help! But please leave me a message on my talk page so I can more readily see it. Good luck and thanks for your work!

Sosthenes12 (talk) 17:25, 29 March 2013 (UTC)Sosthenes12