User talk:Daniel20overstreet/sandbox

Daniel: keep working on your draft as it's hard to offer many comments based on what's here. The first sentences are confusing, so make sure to edit for clarity. I don't know if I understand the connections between cricket, Cubans, British colonists--in what place? in the British Caribbean? and baseball. Also, be sure to work with good scholarly secondary sources and cite your work carefully. Cz17 (talk) 16:18, 3 November 2017 (UTC)