User talk:Daniel7514/Golden-collared manakin/Cbutl37 Peer Review

Peer review Reviewer: Casey Butler (Cbutl37) Reviewee: Daniel7514

1. The article is concise and does not add any unnecessary information.

2. I would remove the and in the phrase "preform and acrobatic exhibitions" as this would clear up the sentence as it was confusing to read. I am not sure what specific chee-poo is referring to so I would add more explanation. I think the last sentence also needs more clarification as the author says the studies examined whether there is an effect but does not state if the studies show evidence for the conclusion that peripheral androgen receptors have an effect on mating signals. The reader does not know if this is true or not.

3. The author just needs a little more clarifications in the few spots I mentioned in #2.

4. My article has the same issue where there is not a section for my information so I will need to make my own section as the author will have to make his own subsection.

5. The section is organized well as there is an intro sentence and two more detailed and in depth sentences that build off courting. The subsection they are putting these sentences under make sense.

6. This section seems important enough for maybe a couple more sentences if the author has the info. There is nothing off topic so nothing needs to be taken away. Once some clarifications are made there should be a perfect amount of sentences.

7. The article does not draw any conclusions and this is a very neutral point of view.

8. There is no words of phrases that are not neutral. The author only adds points from the resources.

9. All statements are based on reliable journal sources as states in the reference section. The author just needs to add citations.

10. There are two different sources that the author uses for only three sentences so there is no room for an unbalanced article.

11. The author needs to add citations to the sentences to be accurate as to where they get their information. Otherwise, you can say the statements are unsourced.