User talk:DanielKrasiev/sandbox

I think the information is dense and organized well. Everything that would hint of having a cited source appears to be cited correctly, assuming that the numbers were not superscripted due to Wikipedia's formatting. Some of the sentences could be arranged in another way that does not create an awkward flow, such as the first sentence. When referencing more than one professor from the same institution that has a similar background in research, you should combine the sentences in order to omit extra words. If the professors have a wikipedia page, maybe there should be a link to their page. I honestly do not know how to do that, but yeah. When discussing nanocrystals, there should be a little more info regarding what exactly it is in everyday language. For example, when you said it involves quantum confinement, what exactly is that if one has never heard that before. Other than that, I think your contribution is solid.

Jason

JQuintana304 (talk) 07:43, 24 November 2016 (UTC)