User talk:Daniel Carnahan

Commentary 12/5/18, IPE
Eriadorian (talk) 01:41, 6 December 2018 (UTC)Eriadorian

1) the lead section for this article should include the following; it cannot start off with tourism in Tanzania, it must focus on macroeconomic and geostrategic context. It should focus on the most relevant factors such as population, gdp, etc. Broad strokes.

2)A Clear structure. Paragraphing should be concise and follow a recognizable pattern and be a contributor to the overall order of this article

3)Balanced coverage based off the policy memo you have a good grasp of the situation, remain balanced in presenting it

4)Neutral content Your sources look good, make sure you dont over use a couple of them and unbalance the whole article.

5)Reliable sources Your sources are reliable, present them well and youl be fine.

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