User talk:Daniellelp/sandbox

Hey Danielle,

Your sections looks pretty good, the layout is well-structured and you give clear and concise descriptions of the various causes.

One thing I would maybe add in would be some links to other wiki articles, especially on the diseases which may cause paresis. Another that I would suggest would be to maybe find one more source to put in as a third citation, especially since you use the Syamal, M. N., & Benninger, M. S. (2016) frequently.

Also, I don't know if this can be put in under epidemiology but maybe state the varying epidemiological reports that are out there? I know there's no consensus but maybe it'd be a good thing to illustrate just how varied opinions are on the matter?

Good job! Bennytheslp (talk) 01:04, 31 October 2016 (UTC)