User talk:Danielnicastro/sandbox

-Good use of title, headings, and subtitles; this made the article and your thought process very easy to follow -Good use of citing. Almost every sentence was cited, which is great. -In the People's Redemption Council beginning section, some sentences could be broken up or simplified -The history section could use a little more information, but what is written looks good -This is a great start so far!

Thank Danielnicastro (talk) 18:43, 17 October 2018 (UTC)