User talk:Danieosro

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Hello, Danieosro, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Microbial oxidation of sulfur
Hi. I'm not sure what you were really aiming for, but I moved your draft to Microbial oxidation of sulfur. It's a nice start, but you should add a lead section to it.

Wikipedia articles should start with a succinct statement of what the topic of the article actually is. The remainder of the lead should summarize all the major points in the article.

You should also make sure that abbreviations are spelled out the first time you use them. Right now, you are using "SOB" in the third sentence of the article, without having spelled it out previously. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 04:40, 26 May 2018 (UTC)