User talk:Danitkin

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dan H. Yaalon (August 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by StarryGrandma was:

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StarryGrandma (talk) 16:21, 14 August 2017 (UTC)

Dan H. Yaalon
Your article is lovely and reminds me of the memoir that Silvan Schweber wrote for Stephan Berko, another Holocaust survivor. However on Wikipedia Yaalon needs a straightforward academic scientist article and it would very useful if you would write it. StarryGrandma (talk) 22:54, 14 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Hi Danny. I did not send you email. You have your account set up (as I do) so that Wikipedia sends you email when someone writes on your talk page. We can talk about the article here.


 * Do you have a rewritten version of the article? StarryGrandma (talk) 16:18, 15 August 2017 (UTC)