User talk:Danjianhong

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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rankersbo (talk) 07:59, 26 May 2013 (UTC)

Hi, good to use the sandbox to practice, but submitting an article for review is not how to ask for advice, that's only for when you have a complete article ready to go.

Welcome to Wikipedia and good luck with your contributions Rankersbo (talk) 08:01, 26 May 2013 (UTC)