User talk:Danlee28/Deep sea fish

Hi Dan, I added a peer review of both the "Deep sea fish" article as well as your sandbox edit ideas. Overall, this article has a lot of potential, but i think it needs a great deal of work making it more reliable. There is a large lack of in-text citations in many of the sections. Therefore, one of your potential edits could either be adding in this proper citations or replacing uncited information with information that you find from articles/journals/etc that you can cite correctly in the wikipedia article!

-Alhost7

Hello DanLee28, I left a peer review of your edit ideas and the original page. There was a little bit of grammatical work for your draft, although I think the addition of a new section on hydrostatic adaptations is merited. Nice job. ABitterGrace (talk) 12:16, 24 October 2020 (UTC)ABitterGrace