User talk:Daralam

May 2008
Please do not add content without citing reliable sources. Before making potentially controversial edits, it is recommended that you discuss them first on the article's talk page. If you are familiar with Citing sources please take this opportunity to add references to the article. Contact me if you need assistance adding references. ''Your geocities pages are not reliable sources. '' Dicklyon (talk) 23:51, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

take it the talk page
You keep adding increasing amounts of meta-stuff to your contribution – that belongs on the talk page, not in the article. Get a consensus there first about whether the journal qualifies as a WP:RS. Dicklyon (talk) 17:23, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Please fix the heading case and punctuation. Lower-case all words that not proper names or sentence initial. Remove extra line breaks between sections. Add a real ref citation. Do not refer to the discussion page in an article. Else I'll do a perfunctory revert again; when the style is passable, it will probably still be rejected on the basis of WP:RS, but you'll at least be in a position to make your case. Dicklyon (talk) 15:30, 29 May 2008 (UTC)