User talk:Darby0341

Welcome
Hello Darby0431! Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope that you will have as much fun as I will have with editing and revising Wikipedia pages so it can be judged by millions of people. This is going to be way cooler than Facebook because on Wikipedia not only your friends can see what you have posted but anyone in the world can see it! Just imagine yourself editing a Wikipedia page so the whole world will see it. Little kids will base their knowledge on what you have written. Millions of people could be effected by just you alone, so no pressure.

A kitten for you!
Thank you for working on the quoll with me! It is soo helpful <3 :)

Savetheoceans (talk) 22:22, 7 November 2011 (UTC) 

Educational Gain

 * Use terms like "at birth" and "at maturity" instead of sequence words.
 * Avoid using "tend to..."
 * The difference between "largest" and "longest," especially in snakes.
 * When talking about animals, avoids words like "enjoy" or "like." (Habitat)
 * Don't use the phrase "a good amount." No one really knows what "a good amount" is. (Threats)
 * Spacing between a ref tag and the sentence. (Geographic Range)