User talk:DarcyDU/The Crowning with Thorns (Titian, Paris)/Artconnoisseur1 Peer Review

For the Lead paragraph maybe you could mention why it had to be returned back to Italy what that process was like, if it affected the state of the painting or why it was in France in the first place. You could possibly get into the political relationship between Italy and France at the time and talk about how that might’ve affected the journey of the painting back to Italy.

I think you could definitely expand on the sculptural references of the painting and maybe point out where exactly in the painting these references are so it’s clearer for the reader.

For the details paragraph, I think the first sentence could use some work in terms of flow. Maybe you could talk about drawing before painting as a technique and research whether or not Titian usually prefers to do that in all of his paintings.

For the Titian’s The Crowing with Thorns (Munich) paragraph, I think you could talk about why there was a duplicate of the painting in Munich and what the differences between the two paintings suggest, possibly something about the different culture or artistic styles in Germany and Italy.