User talk:Daria4HtW

331dot would it be possible for you to check my sandbox article on Hear the World? Or where can I have the article checked by a fellow wikipedian? - so that I don't conflict with wikis policies again. Really tried my best on my first article in english. thx a lot ! User:Daria4HtW
 * If you wish, you can submit it for review by putting the following text on the page: .  I will give you a few comments below:
 * Most articles about companies or organizations here do not have their "vision", "values", and "mission" discussed as those are impossible to independently verify, and are just fluff. Most verifiable reliable sources simply state what the group does, so that's all that needs to be done here. Keep in mind that not every organization merits a page, even if it does good things.
 * Most of the sources given seem to be press releases or from this organization itself; sources need to be independent reliable sources such as news stories or any source having nothing to do with this organization at all.
 * I assume from your username that you are somehow affiliated with this organization. If you are being paid to edit here, you will need to clearly state that on your userpage, please see this for more information.  If you are not being paid, you should still make it clear that you represent this organization on your userpage.
 * I think it's possible to get this page to where it needs to be, once it has more independent sources to support what seems to be notable about it. 331dot (talk) 12:10, 3 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your great and fast feedback ! I will adapt the article accordingly and am very grateful for your help.
 * You are welcome; once you make changes I would suggest posting the AFC submission text(with the brackets) on it to draw the attention of those who spend most of their time reviewing proposed articles and probably know more than I do. But I'm happy to help. 331dot (talk) 13:51, 3 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hear the World Foundation (December 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  19:59, 9 December 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hear the World Foundation has been accepted
 Hear the World Foundation, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  Onel 5969  TT me 15:42, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
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