User talk:DariaZaytseva/sandbox

Hi Daria, I hope my comments would be helpful for your project! Based on the WikiEd Rubric

Lead Section The author stated the article topic concisely in a single sentence. However, the lead section of the draft does not summarize all major points in the article - the author could potentially be missing a lead section and jumped right into the body og the article. It is unclear which section of the article the author is translating, or what article the author is translating. Article There were no sections mentioned in the draft. I think it would be beneficial if the author identifies and divides the article to several sections/ subsections for a better understanding for the reader. The tone of the paper is neutral and appropriate for the encyclopedia audience and the article did a great job in providing balance. References Serveral in-text citations should be added, the reference list is incomplete. Based on the numbered citations, the author did a great job in utilizing a variety of sources in her article. Existing / New Article Since this is a translation page, I think that the author has the right to duplicate sections from the old article to the new one. Teeeeeffany (talk) 09:07, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

Leavitt Peer Comments
Hi Daria! Here are my comments on your draft, good work so far!

1. Lead Section 1. The separate distinct lead section appears to be missing-make sure there is a separate “introduction” type section prior to the body of the article that briefly summarizes what will appear and provides context 2. Article 1. The organization of the article is a little confusing since there are not headings or subheadings yet 2. Info is relevant to the topic 3. Consider adding links to other articles for background such as morphology, cytology, tulips 3. References 1. I see that there are citations in brackets but they are not yet coded into the wikipedia page 2. Only the one source is listed at the bottom, so it is unclear what the sources in brackets are and if they are reliable or not-which I assume they are since it is a translated article — Preceding unsigned comment added by ArloTortillas (talk • contribs) 22:58, 8 December 2020 (UTC)