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Your submission at Articles for creation: Makandure Madush (October 21)
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Theroadislong (talk) 15:51, 21 October 2020 (UTC)
 * , Hiya, I submitted this connected with an OTRS ticket - can you check the primary contributor and notify them rather than me please. Darren-M   talk  17:26, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

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Hyphenation
Hi Darren,

My edits were to correct hyphenation - you have "farright" instead of Wikipedia's, "Far-Right" as seen at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Far-right_politics, and I removed an extraneous space that was inadvertently added. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bobpick (talk • contribs) 14:47, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * , Apologies, I rolled you back too far - I reverted you based on this edit but hadn't seen you had consecutive edits. I've restored your previous edits now. Sorry! (ps: please remember to add ~ to the end of comments you make on talk pages to add your name/timestamp). Best, Darren-M   talk  16:44, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Michael A. Arbib
I did a moderate bit of work on Michael A. Arbib after de-blp-prodding it. It's still far from perfect, but I added several sources and toned down the language in some places. Do you still have WP:PEACOCK concerns? Russ Woodroofe (talk) 16:48, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thanks Russ, looks much better. I think my only remaining concern from a PEACOCK perspective is the long-list of published works. Not sure how easy it would be to run them through a cite tool and only leave the most cited (i.e. notable) ones? Best, Darren-M   talk  16:55, 26 October 2020 (UTC)
 * , yes, I agree that the list is pretty long. I'm generally of the opinion that a book is almost always notable enough to list in an article.  But I confess that I haven't verified the list, and it may be that there are book chapters or similar mixed in to the list.  (OTOH, he appears from GS to genuinely have a large number of highly cited books.)  For now, I'll remove the peacock tag and leave a cleanup tag on the Books section. Russ Woodroofe (talk) 17:07, 26 October 2020 (UTC)

Adam Gase
Hello Darren, Thanks for your feedback. The edit was not that important anyway. I forgot to add sources. -Pierson, a user who sometimes edits anonymously through IP address — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pierson Strandquist (talk • contribs) 03:03, 28 October 2020 (UTC)

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Nicole Couch
Hi  I see you removed Nicole Couch birth date. The reliable source is her management and record label. An ip address had deleted her birth date as well as where she grew up. Please undo and add back. Thank you.. Philip H Taylor (talk) 21:48, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

nice job jannie
Hi Sam Locke here (the real one nbot the dead guy). unrevert my post or I will DOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEE your FRRROOOOOMMMMMMMAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEE. that means pity your yoghurt in french (i am a fluent speaker because i spent time learning french instead of editting wikpedia for free)

from Sam "Samtastic95" Locke — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2A02:C7F:E2F:3200:FD64:FC88:8A38:3017 (talk) 02:13, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * That article is not about you, so I've reverted your changes. Best, Darren-M   talk  02:18, 10 January 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Hoang Lien Son (province)
Please!!! Everyone always decline my page!!! PLEASE NOOO! I- 😭😭😭 Joefrance1995 (talk) 11:04, 3 January 2021 (UTC)
 * , We cannot have articles without references. You need to find references that support the claims in the articles, and insert them. Take a look at WP:REFBEGIN for how to do this. If you continue to re-submit the article without fixing the issues, it's likely that it will ultimately be permanently rejected. Best, Darren-M   talk  16:13, 3 January 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Margaret Gale (January 2)
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The comment the reviewer left was:

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MurielMary (talk) 11:10, 2 January 2021 (UTC)


 * - this was submitted on behalf of an IRC #wikipedia-en-help request per the edit history. Would suggest you notify the page creator instead. Best, Darren-M   talk  15:36, 2 January 2021 (UTC)