User talk:DarrienW2/sandbox2

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Darrien, Your article needs to be consistent with the Wikipedia style. Look at the formatting. Also, the article lacks a clear lead. Mcassell04 (talk) 00:58, 26 October 2015 (UTC)


 * See Manual of Style/Layout for a summary. -- Ricky81682 (talk) 01:18, 26 October 2015 (UTC)

Peer Review 11-15-15
I think this is a great topic, I was unaware this group was even on campus. With that being said, the organization of your article is a little all over the place. I would suggest starting with your introduction and following it up with origins, organization, programs, and potential impact-in that order. In addition, I would add more information about the founding members and why they felt inspired to start the organization, as well as some statistics on the potential impacts of the group. Lastly, I would suggest rereading your article and cleaning up some grammatical mistakes that were throughout. Otherwise, good work! Jhutch2872 (talk) 04:31, 16 November 2015 (UTC)jhutch2872