User talk:Darshna1993

Welcome!
Hello, Darshna1993, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback request
Hi. I got your message. Is there anything I can help you with? Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 13:28, 12 September 2016 (UTC)

ABC score
Nice work on the ABC score article. I fixed some stylistic issues, but there are a few other things that still need fixing. An article should start with a lead section, a short summary of the rest of the article: a mini-article. Your opening sentence should tell your readers, as directly as possible, what the topic is. The rest of the lead should highlight all the major points of the overall article in a paragraph or two.

The other issue is the use of "we". Don't use the first or second person when writing an encyclopedia article. If you find yourself using "I", "we", "us," or "you", it's a good sign that you may be on the wrong track in terms of the tone of the article. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:25, 21 September 2016 (UTC)