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Peer Review for Jonathan Warm Day
You have a good start to the Wikipedia Edit. You do a great job in providing a general background of the artist and how his upbringing influenced his career as an artist. What is the Taos Pueblo Reservation? Can you provide a reference to this or provide some detail of the location of his upbringing.

I would move this sentence " He lives in Taos Pueblo with his two daughters, Carly, 20 and Jade, 21." to another section where you discuss his life later on rather than in the beginning when his early life as a child is being discussed. It is an awkward transition.

Who is Eva Maribel? If she is a renowned artist, it might be beneficial to include a footnote or some sort of reference to another Wiki page that discusses who she is and why she is important. You could also discuss who she is in further detail and how her work inspired Jonathan Warm Day.

How would you describe Jonathan's style? It might be beneficial to describe his style in further detail rather than just saying "Jonathan's style is his own". What inspired his style?

Is there famous acrylic paintings that can be referenced to ? It might be a good idea to reference these famous paintings in the area where it says "He is most known for his colorful acrylic paintings".

You do a great job in providing a reference from Colorado Magazine Online. Make sure you include a section for your citations and references of the work that you are citing/referencing. Medinamu (talk) 00:40, 1 March 2023 (UTC)