User talk:DasHirunite

September 2007
Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia. However, adding content without citing a reliable source, as you did to Tesla Memorial Society of New York, is not consistent with our policy of verifiability. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. If you are already familiar with Citing sources please take this opportunity to add your original reference to the article. Thank you. There are some suggestions for further resources to cure the problems in the article at Talk:Tesla Memorial Society of New York OfficeGirl 21:41, 19 September 2007 (UTC)

Tesla Memorial Society of New York
A template has been added to the article Tesla Memorial Society of New York, suggesting that it be deleted according to the proposed deletion process. All contributions are appreciated, but this article may not satisfy Wikipedia's criteria for inclusion, and the deletion notice explains why (see also "What Wikipedia is not" and Wikipedia's deletion policy). You may contest the proposed deletion by removing the  notice, but please explain why you disagree with the proposed deletion in your edit summary or on its talk page. Also, please consider improving the article to address the issues raised. Even though removing the deletion notice will prevent deletion through the proposed deletion process, the article may still be deleted if it matches any of the speedy deletion criteria or it can be sent to Articles for Deletion, where it may be deleted if consensus to delete is reached. If you endorse deletion of the article, and you are the only person who has made substantial edits to the page, please tag it with db-author. OfficeGirl 21:58, 19 September 2007 (UTC)

dasHirunite takes the advice
DasHirunite took the advice and amended the page. It should be noted that the Tesla Memorial Society of New York does seem to stand out above the others in it's contribution and notability. I have no doubt that it's achievements and notoriety outrank other such societies and that it deserves a place on Wikipedia. I hope I have amended it satisfactorily.

And continued to follow advice
I have added more information, more sources and more structure to the article. I am a published historian and value above all else good source work. I personally have found this particular society difficult to research but I think I have found enough to make it distinctive and notable. My intention is to give a similar entry to each of the leading Tesla Societies, all with points of note set out for the reader to see. Your advice however is still very welcome.

Your point about referring not to the achievements of its members but to the society itself is of course a sound one. So I have added a section called Distinctions. In that we can see the achievements of the society and not of it's members.

Great Enthusiasm!
And I am so very pleased to see that we have added a real life historian to our midst. Your expertise will be helpful not only to adding the Tesla Society of New York to our knowledge base but also to raise the standard on many other articles on Wikipedia. You are welcome, indeed! OfficeGirl 16:33, 21 September 2007 (UTC)