User talk:Dastry

I have added to the introduction and the synopsis. My addition to the introduction i feel gives more of a sense for the book and makes it seem a more attractive read. My addition to the Synopsis i see to give it more of a feel for the story. Your thoughts? Dastry (talk) 18:27, 12 January 2012 (UTC) Dastry


 * I believe that you meant to place this recent edit on your talk page on Inheritance's talk page. Unfortunately, the plot summary on Inheritance's page is already too long and detailed as described by Wikipedia's policy, and should be cut down. If you would like to help in rewriting a more concise summary you are welcome to do so!
 * --Jonadin93 (talk) 20:33, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
 * That was a really industrious editing that you did at Inheritance article. But alas, instead of shortening the already extra-long summary you lengthened it further. I would request you on this note to use your excellent editing skills to review the entire synopsis of this article and shorten it wherever possible without removing important facts therein, now that would be a contribution worthy of applause. Amit Dash (talk) 15:45, 13 January 2012 (UTC)

Welcome!

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