User talk:Davepahl

=The Hammer Museum=

Thanks for your contribution to the article on The Hammer Museum. This information will be very helpful in improving the article. As it stands, the article is written more like an advertisement rather than an objective encyclopedia entry. But it will just take a little work to get it in the proper format. See the article WP:NPOV for information on how to write from a neutral point of view. Mycota 23:43, 14 September 2007 (UTC)

Thank you for commencing the article on the Hammer Museum. After being notified of your sole paragraph, the museum director advised me, a seasonal assistant, that I should write a formal, more in depth submission on the museum's behalf. I worked closely with the proprietor/museum director to convey the type of information that he thought pertinent to his unusual establishment. It is a submission intended to appeal to guests who have already visited, and those who choose to visit via cyberspace. It is in no way to be construed as an advert for the establishment, however it is intended to excite interest and represent the Hammer Museum in a more accurate, interesting and informative way- by people who have in depth knowledge of both proprietor and his vast collection. Thanks again for your help and concern regarding the article and best of luck with all your other Wikipedia endeavors. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.186.108.54 (talk) 20:44, 17 September 2007 (UTC)