User talk:David-from-Montreal

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Chris Sacca
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Chris Sacca, This article has too many primary references, references to subject owned websites, such as LOWERCASE and whatisleft and youtube websites. It needs some secondary sources. Many of the youtube references should be removed due to unreliability. Fouetté rond de jambe en tournant (talk) 03:41, 7 May 2016 (UTC)

The primary references were redacted (no company websites remain including lowercase & whatisleft) ... all secondary sources added. The youtube references are difficult to redact but I am trying. This is a new subject with limited sources. I don't understand some edits such as the removal of his lawfirm as a sub heading: it follows his career path and is critical to the trajectory of his career. Lastly, this is not a 'puff piece'..please see secondary sources.

Cheers David-from-Montreal (talk) 03:36, 9 May 2016 (UTC)

There are two changes that kept being reverted I don't fully understand:

1. The paragraph that was under 'education' is now under 'Career' namely:  "Sacca used his student loans to start a company.." This is an error for the following reasons: i. This event occurred during his education (hence, 'used his student loans..'). ii. His first job was at a law firm not repaying student debt.

2. Fenwick & West keeps being removed as his first job. It is one of the most well known law firms in the west coast and the subject began his career as a lawyer. This is relevant to his career. Why the removal? I don't understand this.

Thanks David-from-Montreal (talk) 04:16, 9 May 2016 (UTC)