User talk:David0808/sandbox

In another study conducted in 1987, the research focused on comparing the self-serving attributions made by individuals who played single sports and those who played in teams. The study gathered 549 statements that were coded for attributional content from lone performers such as tennis and golf players and team performers such as baseball, football or basketball players. The results showed that “lone performers made more self-serving attributions than team performers” because their performance outcomes have a greater effect on their individual esteem unlike for group outcomes where it “must often be distributed among all participants.” To expand upon self-serving attributions made by team sports, a study conducted in 1980 coded “newspaper accounts of baseball and football for attributional content.” The coding of the newspaper accounts showed that there was a “tendency to make internal attributions for success and external attributions for failure” which supports the self-serving bias as about 75% of the attributions from winning teams were internal while about 55% of attributions from losing teams were internal. David0808 (talk) 15:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)David Londono

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Positive Comment:

- I think the information is relevant to the topic, so adding this part will help to the overall understanding of your article.

Constructive Criticism:

- I think all the content is fine, but you need to add the sources that support your information. - I am not sure if your article already explains who are Miller and Ross, but if not, it would be helpful to have more information of them. - Explain a little more the part of "dispositional (internal) factors"

Grammar/Punctuation:

- Overall the sentence structure you are using in the paragraph looks fine. It is understandable. DorcasCh (talk) 22:55, 1 April 2018 (UTC)