User talk:DavidNec/sandbox

Grey Power:

The article seemed to be completely on topic. It might be difficult to continue to expand on the idea as it is such a narrow topic. One of the main ideas that he can expand on is how many member the party has. He can also talk about what issues they have tried to bring attention to in recent years. Overall, the introduction he has done well. The resources he has collected are good. He still needs a few scholarly sources, but he has a great base. He is writing in a neutral tone, but as it is about a political party, he will have to make sure he is not shining a positive or negative light on them. He has to add the in text citations but he has put down what information cam from where. In all, the Wikipedia page is coming along and is a big improvement one the one that already exists.

(Emfarone42 (talk) 18:57, 1 April 2019 (UTC))