User talk:David Izu

International Center for Japanese Culture
You made some edits to this (new) page, and I see you are a new editor, so I thought I would ask you before changing the page myself. I nominated this page for deletion because it appears to be a shadow of the institution's own website. This does not mean I think there should be no article about it on Wikipedia, but just that this is not a very good start. One of the complaints about the article is that it sounds too much like a brochure... but at least some of your edits seem to be making it even more promotional. E.g. "poised to become a bastion of Japanese cultural education..." is "Peacock language", which should be immediately deleted. Your first edit took the trouble to go through and remove the ridiculous superfluous links, so I guess you are really trying to improve the article. But it really needs a total rewrite, so it might be easier to start again from scratch. If you have comments, please reply here - I am watching this page. Thanks! Imaginatorium (talk) 04:57, 7 March 2014 (UTC)