User talk:David Martin Murray

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Hello, David Martin Murray, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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The Mzungu Boy Article
I'm really impressed with your rough draft. I like how concise and easy to follow the summaries are and your use of links thus far is great. My only suggestion would be to expand on the historical significance section - however some of those subjects are loaded so I can empathize with how long that might take you. Really great job, though! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stillber (talk • contribs) 13:19, 6 October 2017 (UTC)