User talk:David Myerscough Jones Association

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Myerscough Jones FCSD (September 5)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 05:41, 5 September 2017 (UTC)


 * Greetings! I hope you don't mind, but I took the liberty of doing some copyediting on your draft article. Please take a look and see what you think. I also took the sources you had included at the bottom of the article and added them as inline references where it appeared that they belonged; you might want to double-check these to make sure that the information lines up with the proper source. I am happy to help you create additional inline references if you want them as well, but hopefully what I have done so far gives you an idea of how to add them. I don't think this will take a whole lot more to resubmit! Cthomas3 (talk) 06:41, 5 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Myerscough-Jones has been accepted
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