User talk:Davidsma mcmaster/sandbox

emilycalvin's peer review.
Overall a very in depth and interesting article with a clear structure and no obvious forms of bias. Some minor suggestions I would make would be to edit the heading format to make it more obvious in the sandbox. The statement "the deposit gets it's meaning from..." could be changed to "the name referes to" or "originates from". At the end of the first paragraph it also mentions "gutter casts" but doesn't say what they are so I would maybe expand on this.

There was a good overview of how the Tempestite can be used in modern day climate science!

Emilycalvin (talk) 21:31, 1 April 2019 (UTC)