User talk:Davidxxkennedy

Please discuss your edits to Robert Devenyi, and follow Wikipedia MOS guidelines--Wikipedia has style guidelines for articles, that are designed to accomodate certain guidelines for content on Wikipedia, please follow them. Thank you. KP Botany 23:45, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Then, if he holds a specific professorship, give a specific reference to it, AND write it as a professorship, not the general. KP Botany 17:26, 6 August 2007 (UTC)

please check www.uhnophthalmology.com if you need any further info...i am sorry i don't know what else you are asking for...many thanks
 * This is an encyclopedia, we don't tell the reader to go somewhere if they need further information, we are the source of the information, and to show it is a reliable source of information, we reference the source in the article. This is not a resume posting service, this is a not a list-serve, this is not a private web-site--which means that self-references as citations don't work, someone else has to report the information.  There are style guidelines that editors have worked on for years to make this a usable encyclopedia for readers.  When you have information to provide for an article, that information is tied directly to the source you obtained it from, and it is not self-reported information.  There are some exceptions to this, but this case does not make a good one, because you are confusing what belongs in the doctor's article with what the clinic he works at is about.
 * Anyhow, the doctor is notable enough to have an article, and a good article at that. I have asked another editor who does excellent research with medical doctors to find the necessary sources to get this article up to snuff.  For now, please trust my style guidelines, or read WP:MOS and show me from that how you would prefer to do things.  The article looks much better than it did, the article is notable enough to have an article, without worrying about it being deleted, but it needs stylistic work and additional references, and an experienced Wikipedia editor has agreed to do this, so the article will look fine in the end.
 * Is there any chance you can get a picture of the doctor, released into the Public Domain, or some other Wikipedia compatable license? KP Botany 21:24, 6 August 2007 (UTC)