User talk:Davidxyz/sandbox

Some comments and edits. I hope they help!

Intro

 * This is a really great and comprehensive intro

Development

 * You include a block quote from Mao Zedong. This is great and adds needed information and context to your article. However, I’ve often seen block quotes on Wikipedia separated from the normal paragraph structure, so just consider formatting.


 * The explanation about Mao’s position is nice, but I’m not really sure if it belongs in a technical development section.


 * Really comprehensive section- great job!

Reception
Cmedvid (talk) 00:56, 9 June 2017 (UTC)
 * This is a really great addition.