User talk:Davyani123/sandbox2

Comments and Suggestions to improve the article
I would like to welcome any constructive criticism from the wikipedia community, to improve this draft. Thank you very much and looking forward to all your replies. Davyani123 (talk) 19:42, 24 February 2018 (UTC)

Leo's Review
This article draft is well organized and is quite easy to follow. It is clear from your references tab that you have placed a great deal of time into formulating this draft. This draft does an excellent job of bringing to light the historical as well as the contemporary aspects of Biofuelwatch. I would like to recommend some areas in which you may improve your article further. The first area of which regards the historical founding of Biofuelwatch. I believe that your article could be further advanced by trying to dig up more information regarding the founding of this organization. Secondly, I would like to recommend adding an area of potential improvement that involves potential controversies associated with Biofuelwatch as you have illustrated they do work with other organizations so it may be of use to include potential controversies they have found themselves in. Overall your article is exceptional and if you continue to work as hard as you clearly did for this draft it will produce an exceptional product. Best regards and good luck. Lpf028 (talk) 20:12, 4 March 2018 (UTC)

I aded more stuff to the axe drax portion and also added some sources to support some of the ideology and aims and whatnot, let me know what you think and what else i can do DominicMullaly (talk) 20:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Great, you've made good additions! I'm reviewing it and you can also, for example edit parts and rephrase where it may sound argumentative/or something. Thank you. Davyani123 (talk) 23:27, 10 March 2018 (UTC)