User talk:DayvidA

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hanel Lumber Company (October 22)
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Oo7565 (talk) 10:41, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Mill City, Oregon
Thanks for your addition to the article. I reverted it because of several problems, including the tone of the information (words like "nestled" are tourism brochure speak), the extensive use of embedded external links and the lack of citations. I just wanted to say that I see this was a good faith effort to improve the article, which certainly needs expanding. I plan when I have some time this weekend to go back over your edits and restore the info, but done according to Wikipedia standards. I hope this explains! Valfontis (talk) 20:47, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Hanel Lumber Company


Hello, DayvidA. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Hanel Lumber Company".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Onel 5969  TT me 13:08, 2 May 2016 (UTC)