User talk:Dazbusby

January 2024
Please do not add inappropriate external links to Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a collection of links, nor should it be used for advertising or promotion. Inappropriate links include, but are not limited to, links to personal websites, links to websites with which you are affiliated (whether as a link in article text, or a citation in an article), and links that attract visitors to a website or promote a product. See the external links guideline and spam guideline for further explanations. Because Wikipedia uses the nofollow attribute value, its external links are disregarded by most search engines. If you feel the link should be added to the page, please discuss it on the associated talk page rather than re-adding it.  MrOllie (talk) 17:01, 16 January 2024 (UTC)


 * The link is to a white paper concerning new technology, invented in the UK and is extremely relevant to the page if it is to be concise. There is no mention of this new technology on the site therefore a link to its whitepaper on the current 'Thermal Energy Storage' page should be made.
 * This is not promotional, the whitepaper is produced by the company that hold the patent for the technology and not the product. Dazbusby (talk) 17:05, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * White papers are marketing documents. Linking to marketing is in fact promotional. Kindly stop attempting to use Wikipedia for advertising. This is not the place to get the world out about new products or corporate inventions. MrOllie (talk) 17:12, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Then please explain the other links to companies and whitepapers on the page and indeed other pages?
 * I am not interested in starting an argument about what should and should not be on a page here, I am interested in allowing the public to gain knowledge of new available technologies.
 * If this cannot be done, then I fail to see what these pages are for and I will happily close my account, never to use these pages again. Dazbusby (talk) 17:18, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * If you have noticed other advertising on Wikipedia, that is a problem to be fixed, not one to be made worse by adding yet more advertising. MrOllie (talk) 17:21, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Ok, with the above in mind, Why is it not permissible to include references to new technologies on Wikipedia pages, especially when they are relevant and provide clarity to the topic? If direct links to sources like white papers are considered promotional, what is the appropriate way to add information about new technologies to a Wikipedia page, ensuring both accuracy and adherence to Wikipedia's guidelines? Dazbusby (talk) 17:25, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * The appropriate way is to use citations that meet Wikipedia's minimum sourcing requirements (see WP:RS), and to ensure that due weight is established. To be perfectly clear - when only a single company is marketing a brand-new technology, usually it should be left out. Wikipedia lags behind the 'cutting edge' by design. The encyclopedia covers things after they have become more commonplace and coverage is widely available. Even with good citations, promotional language (for example offering a unique solution) must be avoided. MrOllie (talk) 17:42, 16 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Ok, that all makes sense, thank you for clarifying Dazbusby (talk) 21:21, 16 January 2024 (UTC)

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Advanced Binary Ice-Based Cold Thermal Energy Storage Technology (January 17) ==  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by S0091 were:

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S0091 (talk) 21:59, 17 January 2024 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Advanced Binary Ice-Based Cold Thermal Energy Storage Technology
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 01:08, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Advanced Binary Ice-Based Cold Thermal Energy Storage Technology


Hello, Dazbusby. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "Advanced Binary Ice-Based Cold Thermal Energy Storage Technology".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 22:46, 17 July 2024 (UTC)