User talk:Dazen31415

I am a university student studying and living in Sydney studying Commerce.

A goat for you!
Goat work with the references

Regan19 (talk) 23:41, 29 March 2020 (UTC) 

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (June 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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-Liancetalk/contribs 23:29, 16 June 2020 (UTC)

Bubba
Thanks for your work on this article, you've done a good job on it. I swapped a few sections around (hopefully I didn't delete anything) and it still needs reviewing, but I just wanted to make you aware of a couple of Wikipedia guidelines, in case you didn't know about them: But seriously, well done on the article. Richard3120 (talk) 19:55, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) You can find general advice for the layout of album articles at WikiProject Albums/Album article style advice. You don't have to follow this to the letter, but it gives plenty of good advice about how to structure the article. I moved the sections around so that the article follows a more or less chronological order, from conception and recording, to release and promotion, to critical reception and impact/legacy... it's easier to read an article that flows chronologically.
 * 2) MOS:REPEATLINK – there's no need to keep linking Kaytranada's name, or any music publication or anything else that occurs more than once... there should be one link in the lead section if it appears there, and one link the first time it is mentioned in the text body, and that's it. I've taken out some of the repeated links, but I know there are more.

Your draft article, User:Dazen31415/sandbox


Hello, Dazen31415. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "sandbox".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 00:27, 17 December 2020 (UTC)