User talk:DazzleMonroe

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, or on the [ reviewer's talk page] . Please remember to link to the submission!
 * You can also get live chat help from experienced editors.
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Rushton2010 (talk) 15:49, 31 March 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for any confusion. I usually like to give quite detailed feedback for people submitting articles, However, we have just come to the end of a drive to clear the huge backlog of articles waiting to be reviewed. During the past month, however, they have been pushing and pushing to clear it and the emphasis moved from detailed responses to sheer quantity of reviews.

Anyway. I failed your article for numerous reasons. It doesn't appear you've read the manual of style as there are numerous breaches of it; the most problematic of this is the lack of inline citations. These citations go at the end of the sentence or paragraph to "prove" what has been said. Please see Citing_sources. I have tried going through your list of references manually, but have been unable to validate all the facts or add these inline citations myself; hence I couldn't approve it's creation. Those things were rectifiable, less so is its fail on notability. Please see Notability (music).

In future if you have any issues, I'd recommend you go straight to the reviewer direct- makes life simpler.

Many Thanks Rushton2010 (talk) 18:04, 2 April 2013 (UTC)

I hope my advise was of help to you. I'm currently receiving abuse and personal attacks due to the fact I replied to you personally. I would be happier in the knowledge you are happy with my reply.

Many Thanks Rushton2010 (talk) 11:30, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Thank you; I'm glad to hear it :) Someone seems to have taken it personally that I replied to you instead of telling him so he could reply to you and so has made a few personal attacks and now is making complaints saying I've ignored you and him and alsorts; which isn't true. Unfortunately I suppose it comes with the territory of Wikipedia: its open for everyone to take part in which means we get a lot of abuse and vandalism.  Anyway; Thank you again. If you need any more help with your article, just ask. -Few tweeks and we should get it approved.

Many Thanks Rushton2010 (talk) 12:13, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The pUKEs concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The pUKEs, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 02:09, 2 October 2013 (UTC)

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The pUKEs


Hello DazzleMonroe. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "The pUKEs".

The page will shortly be deleted. If you plan on editing the page to address the issues raised when it was declined and resubmit it, simply and remove the  or  code. Please note that Articles for Creation is not for indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you want to retrieve it, copy this code:, paste it in the edit box at this link , click "Save", and an administrator will in most cases undelete the submission.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  Ron h jones  (Talk) 17:25, 19 January 2014 (UTC)