User talk:Dbh333

Alternative investment, Quagmire
Hello. Thanks for your edit efforts; i've reverted both the Quagmire and the Alternative investment changes. On the former, your changes weren't encyclopedic, in part, because they featured an ellipsis which contributed to their read as waxing philosophic; additionally, the page is meant as a disambiguation page - not a page for specific article text.

WRT the Alternative investment edit you made, some of the information you added made previously existing text redundant though you also kept the now-redundant text. In addition to this, the text continuing its focus on hedge funds seemed out of place in the article. In the future, if you'd like to make a large change to an article's content, please make a test copy in your own sandbox and point to it on the article's discussion page to solicit feedback. I'll be watching this talk page should you have comments (please read the Wikipedia comment etiquette concerning ordering, indenting, and signing). Thanks. Quaeler (talk) 16:42, 20 October 2008 (UTC)