User talk:Dbonilla89/sandbox

Overall the stub for "Don't Let The Pigeon Drive the Bus!" is very informative and well put together, with things like citations being properly linked. The only thing that needs revision is the description where there are some grammatical and spelling errors. Pam.tag (talk) 16:35, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

The stub for "There Was An Old Lady Who Swallowed a Fly" is off to a good start but could use more information. Firstly, you should consider moving the last sentence in the intro paragraph and making it the first sentence in the description section. It would also be nice to see some reviews for the book from websites like Barnes and Noble or Kirkus Reviews in order to gain insight on what other people thought of the book. Pam.tag (talk) 16:45, 27 January 2016 (UTC)

The stub for "Smoky Night" can be further expanded. The intro paragraph should list the awards the book won as well as other things like the publisher. The description/plot of the book in that first paragraph can be made into it's own section in order to more fully develop the stub. As always reviews are important to include and should be if they can be found. Pam.tag (talk) 16:51, 27 January 2016 (UTC)