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Article Evaluation
Article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Women_in_Libya

Evaluating content: The article is relevant to its topic. I was distracted by the lack of transitions from paragraph to paragraph. I would have liked to see smooth transitions. The latest information comes from 2012, so I would say it is pretty up to date but it would be nice to see a little bit more recent information to back up the authors ideas. I, overall, think it is well written. I think that more content for some of the paragraphs such as: marriage, would enhance the article.

Evaluating tone: I felt as I was reading, I could feel the author being more pro-female than anything else. They never directly said anything but that is the tone I got from it. There were no claims that were heavily biased. I feel like the viewpoint from a woman is overly represented.

Evaluating sources: The links I checked did work correctly and did support the article properly. I believe most facts have reliable sources. I did find a source that I believe is biased. The author even states in their article that this is "their" opinion. The author of the article I am evaluating did not state this bias so it needs to be revised and done so.

The only conversation that is happening is about the ultra-feminist remarks that the author previously had and removed. The article is apart of 4 WikiProjects. This article discusses women in Libya and pretty similarly to the ways we have. It lays out aspects of women and how they are involved in different aspects of life.

Dborage (talk) 00:16, 26 October 2018 (UTC) Destiny Borage

Add Citation
In Libya, the discussion of women and their status/role has been a hot topic since many countries in the Middle East have taken legal action.

Evaluate My Article
I would like to contribute content to the article I selected. There really isn't much there besides a brief background so I would like to provide a full biography of her. The article is under-developed but I plan to change that. There are citations for the claims made and I will keep that up. I would like to add more about her life, ie: where she came from, her job, her culture, and much more. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dborage (talk • contribs) 01:06, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Bibliography for Article
https://books.google.com/books?id=3_7kSP6mH7QC&pg=PA150&lpg=PA150&dq=sylvette+frichot&source=bl&ots=ph95hpiVl3&sig=V_C4jIieAsnWNrY1_qxyhWwezTc&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwja5aaXkMbeAhWB14MKHRK0A88Q6AEwAnoECAMQAQ#v=onepage&q=sylvette%20frichot&f=false

https://books.google.com/books?id=vMlWPez0380C&pg=PA167&lpg=PA167&dq=sylvette+frichot+article&source=bl&ots=UlkgO-IhhZ&sig=OZAVXR1-8Cq-Xer1xr7NAYjdVEE&hl=en&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwiIhPOmkcbeAhWDxIMKHccgAiQQ6AEwC3oECAIQAQ#v=onepage&q=sylvette%20frichot%20article&f=false — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dborage (talk • contribs) 01:16, 9 November 2018 (UTC)