User talk:Dbrook22/sandbox

Your article looks really great so far and well researched! I would suggest adding in some hyperlinks to other pages so that people reading the article can click to pages if they do not know what something is. Additionally, I might try to simplify the language to increase understanding. It is really well written but it may be a little too advanced for a general audience to understand. This could be improved by simplifying the sentences. There was a great coverage of all the necessary topics. Overall, you've done a great job so far! Aberry23 (talk) 18:11, 25 November 2017 (UTC) Great progress on your article. It's really coming together. Feel free to drop me a line if you'd like me to review what you've got so far. AdamCF87 (talk) 14:42, 9 November 2017 (UTC)