User talk:Dcorrea.cal/sandbox

Feedback from Bori
Hi! I like that you made new headings specifically for water and pollution. Reading the existing article, however, it seems that there would be some overlap, since they talk about air and water pollution. So somehow that would need to be integrated. Maybe you could make air and water pollution subheadings under the issues heading, and copy what information is relevant from there to your new paragraphs.

Also, you might be in the process of adding this, but it's important to have citations to back your claims, especially the ones with hard facts.

There are a couple sentences that seem very vague and broad to me, which Wikipedia discourages (e.g. "harms rural communities", or "some local watersheds") I would suggest adding a bit more detail, especially if you're able to cite your source.

I separated the last sentence from the paragraph before it because it seems like a new idea, and I would develop that with at least one more sentence, describing why and how using wood for heating specifically harms the air quality and health.

But overall it was good to read more about the details of environmental pollution in Chile. I wonder if later on it would be possible to write a bit about what's being done to counter these issues.