User talk:Ddaugher22/sandbox

Comments on Assignment 1.
Nice job! Great use of headers and the citation is formatted perfectly. Two main comments. 1) Try to use the citation at the end of sentences that draw most heavily on the topic. 2) In the writing itself, a logical link was needed between aerosol deposition and precipitation. What is the mechanism in the climate on what that is, and is that the most important thing to highlight about this? It seems focusing the headers on aerosol deposition on ice would have helped guide the reader. See my edits by using the "View history" page, and click "prev" next to my (Answer to the Rock)'s edit record. Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 15:29, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments on Assignment 2.
Nice use of bullet lists.
 * I agree the article is perhaps too long. Ways to reduce it would be to narrow the scope. I am not sure what you mean by 'defining agriculture'. I like the suggestion on the Talk page to split CO2 emissions from agriculture and climate change effects on agriculture.
 * Now it is time to think about your main paper for the class. Remember it has to be on a "long term" topic: changing climate and environments over centuries or longer time scales. Answer.to.the.rock (talk) 16:08, 27 April 2020 (UTC)