User talk:Ddieudonne/sandbox

This is Heather Brown reviewing. There isn't much to review here....I thought I went to the wrong page at first, but I didn't. Perhaps this person didn't have time or forgot, but there is only one section here, which includes a very brief overview of the condition. There is only one reference. Hopefully the rest will be filled in by the end of the semester....

Hey! I know when we spoke in our group you were having trouble finding solid information on this topic and seems like the struggle is still there. I think this just shows how important it is for there to be a compilation of information onto one forum/page and you can initiate that with this page! Hopefully you're able to find more information on it soon :) Janki Patel — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jpatel45 (talk • contribs) 05:24, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Hi, it seems like you're having trouble finding information on this topic. I definitely agree with Janki that it would be very helpful to start a forum on this topic! I would recommend talking to Dr. Weiner about getting a new topic if this one has a lack of information so that you're not too stressed about it. Best of luck finding more information. DaniellaAmato (talk) 18:25, 14 November 2017 (UTC)Daniella Amato

Sweiner02 (talk) 19:39, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * Nice clear abstract, but make sure to link all important terms!
 * For the different conditions in mechanism, just listing is not enough. How do they cause it? Give as much as is known.
 * You haven't discussed imperforate hymen or vaginal septum in mechanism, but listed them in abstract.
 * If there is no prevention for a condition, just leave it out.
 * You listed a whole bunch of causes in mechanism!
 * You may need to separate conditions in prognosis.
 * Obviously Recent Research needs to be fleshed out a lot more.
 * Well-cited throughout.
 * Needs a LOT more links to other wikipedia articles.