User talk:De.small1/Alicia Garza/Ladwi047 Peer Review

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Nice addition of including the other co-founders of the Black Lives Matter movement, as it calls attention to other important women.

I like how you made BLM into its own section and expanded on it with The Movement for Black Lives. But also in this section, I noticed Trayvon Martin's name was left unlinked, so I don't know if this was intentional or not.

Also in The Movement for Black Lives section, you talk about the BLM movement too, but when you refer to the Movement for Black Lives as just "the group" it is not always clear if you mean this movement or the BLM one. Not every mention of "the group" needs to be changed, just a few of them where it could be mistaken for BLM.

The Notable Speeches section only talks about one speech, but the version of the article before you edited mentioned two. So I don't know if it was intentionally left out or you forgot to add it back in with more explanation or if I'm just not seeing it. And if it is not being included, I suggest changing the heading as it suggests multiple speeches will be talked about. Ladwi047 (talk) 19:41, 24 November 2019 (UTC)