User talk:Deborah.li3163

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Nice work on your draft article. A little feedback on the article


 * I moved the article to Draft:Ueli Schibler. It had been created at User:Ueli Schibler/draft which would be a subpage for User:Ueli Schibler, if such a user account existed.


 * The tone of the article could use some work. It's written like a biography rather than an encyclopaedia article. Statements like "Despite this, Schibler is still very fond of snakes" (in the Early life and family section) or "Schibler was thrust into the world of chronobiology on a single serendipitous discovery" (in the Serendipitous discovery section) make for interesting, personable reading, but really aren't encyclopaedic in tone. In addition, we generally don't list people's children by name unless the children are themselves notable, since it's sometimes perceived as an invasion of privacy.


 * Wikipedia articles aren't CVs - long lists of honors, service and publications shouldn't be listed, although they can be included in the body of a paragraph.


 * Since Schibler is alive, the policy on biographies of living people applies. While your draft needs more sourcing in general (every statement should be directly tied to a reliable source) this sort of thing is especially important when writing about living people. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:51, 16 April 2015 (UTC)