User talk:Debra2710

Hi I am working on the wiki page for Jia Nailiang This is the link to my sandbox: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Debra2710/sandbox This is the original page of the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jia_Nailiang I have done my editing and I hope to hear from your opinions! Here's what I have done for the article, 1. I cleaned up the introduction 2. I added the heading "Personal life" and sub-titles "Relationship", "Children", and "family background" 3. I have added updated information about his relationship and children 4. I cleaned up the English translation for "family background" 5. I added my resource to the "resources" I would love to hear your comments on my changes, thanks!

--Debra2710 (talk) 23:42, 21 October 2013 (UTC)